Saturday, October 25, 2014

Benn's letter corrections

Just 4 minor changes. I've attached the new/improved version for you to just attach to an email for him.
1. Bible is capitalized
2. The first reference of "corrupt" was changed to "different" as it seemed harsh and "corrupt" was used in the following sentence.
3. "allows" was deleted; "The summers are hot and the winters are cold and the humidity allows stimulates mold growth..."
4. "try" was changed to "trying"; "This time of walking up to absolute strangers and try[ing] to help..."
I (of course) took off the P.S. to me. Thank you for being willing to reach out to your cousin at this important time in his life. I love you like crazy!

Oh, and I got your box. Anything in particular you want me to do with the 12 (!) shirts? Can the girls wear the ties? Do you need extra $$$ this week to replace them all?!?!@?
btw: next time you send me a box :) PLEASE send a note too! It was fun to see how you "packed" and could visualize your doing it...but I crave hearing from you.
btw2: Did you receive ~3-5 letters/cards from me one week? I was on a kick. Hopefully they brought smile to your face!
Much love darling!

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